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PostSubject: Nishi Kozen   Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:08 pm

Personal Info

Name: Nishi Kozen

Age: 765

Visible age: Unknown since he wears a mask (22)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Nishi stands at 5’11” and weighs about 170 lbs. He has a muscular, yet skinny build. By muscular yet skinny I mean his arms are skinny but you can tell he has muscle on them. He has a semi skinny upper body, but he also has a very defined six pack. His body shows no signs of any scars, scratches, scrapes or blemishes. His body is what some would call perfect. When you look at him you can't really tell he is a fighter or that he has ever been in a fight.

Nishi has black eyes with purple pupils. His pupils tend to pulsate every now and again. The pulsating happens at randoms times and Nishi can not time them. He has jet black hair with light purple highlights scattered all through it. He keeps his hair in a bed of messy spikes which sit all over his head. It's basically a constant case of bed head. He never sees a point in fixing it, since he will just be going back to sleep.

When you first look at Nishi you can not tell where his hollow is and as long as he keeps his jacket buttoned up you will never know where it is. When he opens his jacket his hollow hole is finally revealed. His hollow hole is 23.5 inches in circumference and sits in the middle of his chest directly above his abs, but just below peaks. If you were to compare his hole to a human toy it would be the same size as a child sized soccer ball. Surrounding or outlining the outside of the hole are a white hollow remnants. These remnants don't hold any special meaning to Nishi. To finish it off Nishi's espada number is tattooed directly above his hollow hole.

The most interesting thing about Nishi is his mask fragment. Normally a mask fragment is exactly that a fragment of their former mask. In Nishi's case his mask fragment is an actual mask. Because of this mask nobody has ever seen his true face and he plans to keep it that way. The mask is broken up into four color blocks. Each block is either black or white with the other alternating next to it. Running through the mask are different tribal lines. As each line passes through to another block they alternate to the opposite color. The mask itself is rather skinny just big enough to fit and cover Nishi's face. The overall appearance is nothing special except for top right black block. This block has a medium sized black horn that sticks out from it.

Nishi's clothing is very unique. The overall color scheme alternates between black and white with a hint purple thrown in every now and again. The pants are normal espada pants; they're just a bit bigger and looser. Wrapped around his waist as his belt is a purple scarf. The scarf is just longer enough to fit and tie around Nishi. The jacket is longer then a normal espadas jacket and the shoulders have a long scarf like clothing from them. The right scarf is black and the left scarf is white. From the collar of the jacket to the end of Nishi's peaks. The jacket forms a black and white skull like face. Besides his two zanpakuto which are each strapped to one hip. His scarfs are the only other clothing accessories he has. He never saw a point in having so many things on. To him all that extra stuff would just weigh him down and annoy him.

Personality: When you first meet Nishi there are a few words to describe him, such as calm, collected and at times quite. He tends to not worry about the things that must be worried for and he never shows emotion unless the situation demands it. Under normal times, situations or when he is around others Nishi will have the same bored expression pastered upon his face. Most of the time Nishi wont speak much, choosing to observe more then speak. Not much of a talker Nishi will stay to his own thoughts and dreams. On the rare occasion Nishi engages into a long conversation, that is more than small talk, he will only do so because it's something that intrests him greatly.

Calm, collected, quite are just the minor things that make up Nishi. The main thing or word to describe Nishi is Lazy to the highest degree. Nishi is nothing more then a lazy laidback bum. He'd rather sit around and watch stars all night rather then fight. Because he is so lazy Nishi doesn't like to be rushed and will let it be known. Most of the time he will take his time doing things, so engrossed in his own thoughts Nishi wont do things at a faster rate than he needs to. Nobody knows is he does this on purpose or if it is just how he is.

His two overall favorite things to do in life are sleep and star gaze. His least favorite thing to do is fight POINTLESS fights. He feels pointless fights do nothing but ruin his lazy, laidback nature. If he finds a fight to be pointless he will not fight it and there is nothing that can make him fight. Just because he'd rather not fight doesn't mean he's a push-over. When the time comes and he has to fight he will fight without remorse or mercy. During battle Nishi regards his enemies with the same expression and attitude he gives his comrades: complete boredom and contempt. Battle is the only time Nishi will do things at a higher speed rate and he'll only do that once he has read his opponent. Nishi enjoys a good battle, but a long carried on one bores him very easily and as such he will want to end it soon. Despite the way he acts or comes or comes off, Nishi is very intelligent and a brilliant stagiest. He can read his opponents movements and fighting style after only moments of fighting them. These traits are often over shadowed by his laziness.

With Nishi's laziness also comes his pride. He may be a lazy, laidback bum, but he has pride. Because of this pride he lives by these words "I am who I am, I can be no way else. Should I stop being who I am, than I no longer deserve to live". Nishi holds these word in the highest regards. They are like his code or honor or warriors code.

The last thing to describe Nishi is power driven. Nishi has always lusted after power ever sense he became a Vasto Lorde. He wishes to become most powerful being in the entire world. Only then will he truly be satisfied or so he hopes. He will not let anything stand in the way of his goal to become more powerful and he will do anything to get power. As long as it doesn't go against his code of honor. To sum it up at first glance Nishi seems like a nice lazy loner, but that is far from the truth.

The truth is Nishi is all the things stated above, but these things are just a front. Nishi being one to never reveal his true motives or intentions has created a fake personality for himself. This fake personality is so people will see him as weak and try to take advantage of what they believe to be a weak individual. His true personality is one of sarcasticness, brutality, ruthlessness, and a sadistic nature. The last three things are fueled by never ending blood-lust. Nishi doesn’t care about anything or anybody if it’s in his way he will kill it without hesitation or another thought. He’s come to realize that you ask once and if it’s not done at the moment you asked then you force it to happen. The best way to describe him is by simply saying he has thrown away his humanity or has forgot what it was to ever be human. If a time should ever come when Nishi has to stop with his front and show his true self. May god have mercy on the poor soul who was the unfortunate one to be the cause for him to reveal himself because Nishi won't.

Marital Status: Single

Sexual preference: Heterosexual

Rank: Cero Espada

Aspect Of Death: Nihilism

Zanpakuto Information:

Name: Juicio (Judgement)

Appearance: Because Nishis' reiastu was so big when he ascended to arrcanar his zanapkuto powers where split between two zanpakuto. They both still lead to the same release; they're just two halves to the same whole.

The first Judgment zanpakuto is a regular size Tachi. The blade is around 28 inches long and is made of a very flexible white steel. The overall weight of the entire blade is 2.25 pounds. The handle of the Tachi is all white with gold diamonds on the inside. The guard is in the shape of a gold sphere with line running through it.

The second Judgement zanpakuto is a regular size katana. The blade is around 25 inches long and is made from carbon steel. This is blade is very unique in the fact that it is made up of two colors instead of one. The first color which covers majority of the blade is black. The black color runs from the tip of the blade to guard. it covers about 3/4ths of the blade and stops just before the butt of the blade is reached. The butt of the blade is made from the same carbon steel, but it's silver not black. This blade is slightly heavier then the Tachi weighing 3 pounds. The gaurd of blade is in the shape of a very thin 4 point star. The inside of the star is black and the outline of the star is silver. The grip is a combination of black and red with a gold cap on the end.

When Nishi goes into his resurrection he must hold both blades and speak the release phase. After Nishi speaks his release phrase two separate things happen. The first thing is the Tachi glows a bright white and engulfs Nishi in a white light. The second thing is the Katana glows dark black and after the white light has engulfed Nishi. The dark light overpowers and engulfs Nishi and the white light. Thw two lights fuse causing a grey light to form and then fade away. When the grey light fades Nishi stands in his resurrected state.

The first notable change to Nishi in his resurrected state is his hair. Before his hair was black and purple but now its solid white. It no longer sits in a bed of messing spikes, now it is spiked up or standing. The second notable change is his clothing; his overall physical look is the same as before. The first and biggest difference is now his clothing is solid black. The second difference are the scarfs that sit on his shoulders. Before they were just single scarfs but now they have split into two separate but joined scarfs. The scarfs are joined by two smaller scarfs they connect them to each other. He also has six little scarfs around the collar of his neck. The last and finally change to his resurrected state is his mask. The mask is no longer black and white but solid black. Along with the color the look of the mask has changed. The mask is completely closed with no eye holes, yet Nishi can still see.

Now in this state it looks as if Nishi doesn't have a weapon, but that is far from the truth. Nishi has 8 blades though only one is noticeable when you first see him. The first blade you see is a combination of the Tachi and Katana. Nishi calls this blade Seruro.(I don't really know how to explain it so look at the picture). You don't see this blade when Nishi first enters resurrecion because it is strapped to his back. Nishi will keep the blade stappred to his back until he feels he needs to use it.

The other 7 blades are truly unique.

Floating around Nishi in his resurrected state at all times are 7 invisible blades. These blades are simple known as the The Sins. Each blade is shaped differently and unique to itself and represents one of the seven deadly sins. When the blades are idle or just floating around Nishi they are invisible. This is the reason why at first look it’s as if Nishi only has one blade. When Nishi wants to attack or defend with them they will appear, meaning as soon as they move or come in contact with something, the blades will flash and stay exposed for several seconds before vanishing again. Nishi is able to move them around with his mind, and doesn't need to physical touch them for them to attack or defend. When I talked to some people about it, they found a visual really helped so this is kind of what I am going for.

Resurrecion Information:

Release Phrase: Llueve Sobre Ellos, Juicio (Rain down upon them, Judgment)

Looks: It's above

Techniques:

*I feel I should give a small explanation to exactly what Nishi's abilities really are.*

Magnetism Manipulation: Nishi has the ability to generate and control existing magnetic fields. Many believe that his power is limited to manipulation of ferrous metals meaning he can affect a very large quantity of metal at one time: he can levitate metallic objects. He is also able to use his magnetic force to push and pull paramagnetic and diamagnetic objects. The maximum amount of mass that he can manipulate at one time is unknown. If he had to guess he'd say anywhere betweem 500 and 1000 yards. He can manipulate a large number of individual metal objects simultaneously, and has been shown capable of assembling complex machines using only his powers. Even though this is his power this is far from the truth of what his power is really capable of. Using his power Nishi can affect the magnetism of things at a molecular level. By doing this Nishi can levitate his own body and fly, form a force field around himself or enemies. He is so adapt to the power that he can rearrange how things are connected, potentially turning any solid surface into metal. Yes this does mean that Nishi can potentially control the iron in ones blood and body. Because electricity and magnetism are both aspects of the electromagnetic force, it is possible for Nishi to generate electrical currents (via electromagnetic induction) and to produce electromagnetic radiation of various frequencies. This radiation can result in EM pules of great strength. It has also been said that Nishi is capable of resisting telepathic attacks because of some physical aspect of his electromagnetic powers that can interfere with telepathy.

*What is stated above is just a description of how the power works. Below are the techniques that involve the power and what Nishi can ACTUALLY do in battle with the power.*

Arrancar Gained Techniques

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Regular Techniques
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History, RP Sample and RP Challenge.

History:

A Gillian classed hollow or higher are comprised of thousands upon thousands of different hollows. Which means they have thousands upon thousands of human memory's storied in their brain and if they were to try to remember just one exact story it would be near impossible. Nishi is no different, but even though he had all these human lives stuck in his mind one stood out the most to him. He took it as this one to be his real and true self in other words he believes this one story in particular was who he actually was before losing himself and begin devoured by his despair.

Human Life



In the far beginning, at the age during when Nishi was still a living being, he had an average living and life. He wasn't all too special in any way as far as physical looks go, but what was special about him was his job. Nishi was a trained assassin and had almost thousands of battle, tactical, and killing strategies in his head at all times, no matter the situation. Nishi was very good at his job and never failed a mission. On his regular day job, he worked as a waiter in a restaurant near Kamakura town.

One night when he was casing out his next target he had heard a loud explosion a block away from him. Knowing this could possible ruin his kill he had to check it out. When he got to the source of the explosion, his eyes were amazed at what he saw.The damage before him seemed all to new, and, from what? Meteors? There were craters, huge slashes in the buildings and the ground. What had happened here? That was the main question in his head. Not completely sure he wanted to find out, so he turned to walk back to his future kill. As he walked his vision caught sight of creature with a white mask. A dark energy rose from creature and started to engulf Nishi. Was this the cause of the damage and destruction?

Nishi would soon find out as the creature let out a loud roar. The pure force of the roar was enough to cause more buildings to fall. When the roar died now the creature turned his attention on to Nishi. Nishi knew what he was thinking and decided to beat him to the punch. Using his own battle and fighting tactics, Nishi attacked the creature. Despite everything he knew, he still wasn't a match for the creature and within seconds, his body was smashed into pieces. Without a second thought the creature absorbed Nishi's soul.

Hollow

The furthers Nishis mind could remember back was to the day he evolved from Gillan to Adjuchas. He doesn't remember much about the process of evolving. He just remembers one thousands separate minds turning into one unified mind. That one unified mind being him. When he awoke he was in the Menos forest with a new look and no name. The look was that of a six foot tall wolf with wings. The wolf had no idea what to do so he just roamed the forest. It wasn't until he ran into another hollow who tried to devour him and fail did the wolf know what he would do. The wolf figured his purpose was to roam and eat all the weak hollow who failed to eat him, so that's what he did.

For years after his birth he roamed the forest devouring every hollow he came in contact with. He didn't care what the hollow looked like, or how he acted. They were all food for him to feast on. The wolf had not a care in the world to him his life was perfect. He had never come across a hollow that could beat and devour him. He was the top of the food chain in the forest, but all that changed.

One hundred years after his birth the wolf was doing what he always did. He had just killed and was devouring a bat hollow. When another presence started appeared in the forest. The power of this presence rivaled that of the wolf, which peaked his curiosity so much he threw his bat feast away. Enticed by the soon to be meal the wolf stalked and hunted the presence down. When he found the creature behind the power he wasn't surprised at what he was doing. The creature was feasting on a weak hollow, but instead of turning to face the wolf. The creature continued to devour his current meal. The wolf took this as an insult and launched at the creature. The creature had anticipated this and fired a cero from his tail at the wolf. The wolf who had never seen a cero before in his life tried to devour it. Sure enough he failed and was blasted back. The creature laughed and stood from his meal. When the wolf looked at him his eyes couldn't believe what he was looking at. This creature looked like a human instead of an animal. Slowly the creature made his way over to the wolf.

You are a weak excuse for a hollow. My last meal put up more fight then you did

What?

The creature started to laugh. It was obvious he was playing with wolf, which made the wolf infuriated. With his rage boiling the wolf lunged at the creature and snapped his mouth around the creature’s neck. Sensing he had victory the wolf closed his mouth down tighter, but was surprised when his mouth wouldn't move anymore.

What's wrong wolfy? Can't get a good taste

Before the wolf could even respond he was blasted back by another cero. This cero was more powerful then the last and almost killed the wolf. The creature just laughed as he stared sown at the ding wolf.

I was wrong you do have some fight in you and because of that I will give you a gift.

The creature took his right arm and ripped it off. As soon as it separated another arm grew back. The creature then tossed his arm to the wolf.

Devour some of my power and become stronger. I can tell you will make a fine meal one day, so grow stronger so I Shiro the Vastor Lorde can have the pleasure of devouring you one day.

With that Shiro vanished. The wolf not knowing what else to do devoured the arm. Instantly his power tripled and all his wounds were healed. The wolf had never experienced anything like what he had just went through. That’s when he changed his mission from devouring the weak hollow. To becoming strong enough to devour and consume Shiro. He didn't care what he had to do to do, but he would devour Shiro at all cost.

Another hundred years would pass before the wolf ever saw Shiro again. During that time the wolf focused on nothing more then getting stronger. He explored more of forest to find and devour stronger hollows. In the hundred year time frame his power had doubled 10 fold. Once again he was at the top of the food chain. Not only had his power increased but, he also learned the art of firing a cero. In the wolfs mind he could finally take Shiro down. For the next filthy years the wolf speant all his time hunting Shiro down. It took an additional twenty-five years but the wolf finally found Shiro.

Wolfy you found me

The wolf wasted no time and fired a several ceros at Shiro. Following the ceros the wolf charged at Shiro. for some reason Shiro didn't fight back and took ceros head on. This surprised the wolf and caused him to sop his attack.

Why are you not fighting back?

Shiro laid on the ground with a smile on his face. The wolf didn't understand and slowly approached the beaten Shiro.

I lied when I told you I was Vastro Lorde. I'm just a Adjuchas like yourself, but together we can become a Vastro Lorde. I gave you my power to put you on the track to become stronger, i knew I couldn't do it by myself. Now devour me so we can become one and reach the true pinnacle of power.

The wolf wasted no time and devoured every last bit of Shiro. At first nothing happen, but after a moment the wolfs entire body started to shake. The shaken eventually lead to his body exploding with reiastu. As the smoke from the explosion cleared the wolf was no longer a wolf. He was now a black humanoid figure with a wolf's mask and hollowifed wings. He no long had wolf claws but razor sharp talons and a long tail. Instead of a mouth full of teeth he had a mouth full of fangs. He was no longer Shiro or the wolf, but an entirly new being. This beings name was Nishi. With his new power Nishi retreated to the depths of the forest. He continued to eat and devour hollows, but instead of being very active like he was before. He had a less active almost lazy demeanor to him.

Arrancar

Another hundred years had passed before Nishi had shown his himself. His power had grown so great that he could devour any hollow he stepped within 10 feet of his reiastu. Nishi would have kept himself hiden, but he heard a rumor about a greater power. Now Nishi didn't care about this greater power, but the two hollows that were made to form him did. Because of this Nishi would always crave and seek out more power. He had a thrust for power that would never end. With his thrust driving him Nishi left the forest and went topside to the white sands. Nishi spent another fifty years roaming the sands looking for this new power.

Nishi had almost given up until he came across another Vastro Lorde hollow. The Vastro Lorde was much weaker then Nishi which is why nishi beat him with much ease. Before Nishi devoured him the hollow begged for his life. The hollows crys for life amused Nishi, but not enough to stop him. Just when Nishi was about to start his feast the hollow said something about a higher power. The hollow promised to tell Nishi how to achive it if Nishi let him live. driven by the power Nishi released the hollow, and sure enough he told him how to achieve the new power. Even though the hollow told Nishi how to get this power Nishi still devoured the hollow. Nishi wanted to be his most powerful when he transcended into this new power.

With no more power to be gained as a regular hollow, Nishi was ready to take that step towards more power. Without hesitation he dug his nails under the rim of his mask, Nishi began to tear the mask from his face. The flesh tore loudly from the base of his face, as the mask slowly pulled off. The sinew tore and shredded, allowing blood to ooze forth. The pain…was…indescribable. Nishi was literally peeling his face off. It was unlike anything he had ever felt before. Finally, the mask gave up its fight and fell to the sands with a clink. Now, it was time to feel another feeling for the first time – unimaginable power.

The body of Nishi began to attack itself. The pain that he had felt when removing his mask was now reverberating throughout his body. Reiatsu was pouring from every inch of its body…from every fiber of its existence, and the struggle to be released was more painful than anything it had ever felt. But, it was also more exhilarating than any feeling. It felt odd to be simultaneously in pain and ecstasy, but those were the two predominant feelings. Dropping down to his knees, Nishi grabbed his sides in an apparent self-hug. In all actuality, Nishi was simply trying to not lose himself in the transformation. Slowly, the once razor-talons dulled into human-like hands. The two wings that set so high on his back, sucked into his form. And like a piece of spaghetti being sucked into a hungry mouth, the tail reabsorbed into the body.

The sleek black skin color that had once covered the body of Nishi had been absorbed as well, leaving behind a smooth slightly dark tan skin that revealed rippling musculature. His face flattened and became incredibly human looking, which was somewhat unsettling for the Nishi. Finally, the fangs of Nishi rescinded and gave way to smaller more humanoid teeth. And with the final change complete, the pain completely disappeared. Reaching up to feel its face, Nishi touched a softer, smoother face. In the peripheral, Nishi eyed a mask and two swords lying in the sand next to him. The mask and blades beckoned the touch of NIshi…begging for a master. Grasping the blades and mask, he felt the presences of his full power locked inside. He had finally done it, he had reached the ultimate pinnacle of power. He was now an arrancar.

RP Sample:

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Nishi stared blankly as both the bala and cero countered and hit. So far he had predicted everything the shinigami would do. Even if the shinigami refused to believe him, Nishi had him and his attack pattern figured out. It would only take moments for Nishi to prove it. Since the shinigami's normal attacks would no longer work on Nishi, he knew his power would win the fight. The shinigami knew this too, thats why he did the only logical thing he could do; go bankai. Which Nishi predicted he would do.

Just as Nishi had thought the shinigami bankai-ed and tried to attack again, this time with multiple scythes. Nishi knew he wouldn't be able to defend against all them but some was better then none. Without time to waste Nishi moved his blade to block the scythe coming at his neck. He used his leg and other hand to defend against the scythe attacks coming at his legs and back. Nishi ignored the other two scythes since he had no way to defend against them. Nishi showed no sign of pain as the other scythes dug into his flesh. He kicked himself several feet away from the shinigami and his scythes.

"Poor misguided shinigami. I predicted you'd go bankai, thats the only option you have. The funny thing is you think you're the only one who can achive another power level. "

Slowly Nishi's reiatsu began to manifest itself around his body.

"Despertar, Juicio (Awaken, Judgement)"

Nishi's reiatsu exploded in a blinding light and he vanished into the light. As the light slowly faded away Nishi stared at the shinigami with a rather disappointed look on his face.

"I really didn't want to fight, but you just had too. Now I have to get serious and kill you."

His overall appearance still looked the same except his wounds were gone. The only real difference was the 3 hollow wings on his back. He had the normal two on his back, and the third set in the middle of those two pointed outwards

"This is my Segunda Etapa, look upon it well shinigami for it is the last thing your eyes will ever see"

As Nishi spoke a blade made of pure white light formed in his right hand. He pointed the blade at the shinigami just as he finished speaking. This was a sign and invitation for the shinigami to come to his death.

*This is an RP sample from a different bleach site using the same character*

RP Challenge: (If you have aimed for a high rank, you will get a challenge. Don't post anything here at first. The person that look through your application will give you a sentence like "You are in a cave, there is a bear outside. What will you do?" Kill the bear in a epic way or die fighting? If the applicator think that you did it well here, the rank is yours!)


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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:14 pm

Pictures of the things I describe above

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:16 pm

First thing:

Age: Unknown

Visible age: Unknown since he wears a mask

Even though it is unknown to the citizens all around the world, it is not unknown to you. You may put () around unknown to the public or something but please put an age that at least matchs his body.

Second:

Floating around Nishi in his resurrected state at all times are 7 invisible blades. These blades are simple known as the The Sins. Each blade is shaped differently and unique to itself and represents one of the seven deadly sins. When the blades are idle or just floating around Nishi they are invisible. This is the reason why at first look it’s as if Nishi only has one blade. When Nishi wants to attack or defend with them they will appear, meaning as soon as they move or come in contact with something, the blades will flash and stay exposed for several seconds before vanishing again. Nishi is able to move them around with his mind, and doesn't need to physical touch them for them to attack or defend. When I talked to some people about it, they found a visual really helped so this is kind of what I am going for.

Invisible blade a little too much. Your ability is over magnetic waves, if you want to move the blades that's fine. But making them invisible shouldn't really be possible with that ability.

Third:

Now at the moment, your maximum amount of mass that you can control is unknown. That isn't acceptable. If it isn't in your app, you could godmod like hell with that.

Fourth:

make miniature wormholes to safely teleport himself and others via the wormhole.. The wormholes are done by creating an extraordinarily powerful electromagnetic force, spinning at an extremely fast rate. He is so adapt to the power that he can rearrange how things are connected, potentially turning any solid surface into metal. Yes this does mean that Nishi can potentially control the iron in ones blood and body.

No wormholes. No turning people/organisms into metal.

Fifth:

Name: Molecular Manipulation
State: Both
Type: Active Trait
Description: Over time, Nishi’s understanding of his power grew, and continues to grow. When he first released, he simply thought he could control metal. He then realized it was actually magnetism. After studying magnetism, he realized how vast his powers really were. When he's starting to get serious and focus his strength, he can affect the magnetism of things at a molecular level. Nishi can compress his reiatsu into a solid surface to slowly alchemize it in a magnetised metal. He can do this for up to a 100 yard radius.

This isn't acceptable. You can't affect it at a molecular level.

Sixth:

Name: Stop Right There
State: Both
Type: Offensive(Bakudo)
Description: Nishi's answer to "those damnable incantations" used by the shinigami. He focuses intensely on the magnetic charges within an opponent's body and stills them. He can freeze the opponent completely, or only select parts of their body. Nishi does this by pointing either one of his palms face up at his opponent. He also acutally says the words "Stop Right there". This attack works like a bakudo in that it does no damage, and lasts for a turn unless the opponent shatters the effect.
*Note: There are several Bakudo spells which paralyze an opponent causing them to not be able to move at all. I can name them and link you to the descriptions if you'd wish*
Usage: 3 times per battle, 4 post cooldown

I know you said you could link me to those, but can arrancar USE bakudo? I mean, I was pretty sure that only shinigami could do that.

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Name: Magnetic Charm
State: Both
Type: Supplementary
Description: After seeing the shinigami move so fast, Nishi began to wonder how to move the same. He's learned to manipulate the magnetic pull of his body and a target to a whole new level. He combines his highest speed with magnetism to pull himself towards his enemy at blinding speed. He "charms" their own magnetic pulls to the point where they are extreme opposites. Combined with his speed, this instantly places Nishi near his target.
Usage: Unlimited times per battle; 3 turn cool down.

There is already an ability for arrancar that makes them faster. Its called sonido.

Eighth: Master Tactician, Master Manipulator, Sonido Master, and Master Swordsmanship. That's pretty much saying your guy is superman, dude. Give him a weakness. Enhanced Durability and Immense Spiritual Pressure, another superman thing. Seriously. Everyone needs a weakness and I've read through those quite a few times to decide it, your guy isn't weak. He's overly powerful. Some would say annoyingly powerful. Almost godly.

That's all for now, if someone catchs something else that I didn't they'll probably rape you some more.

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:48 pm

~The Sins: The blades are only invisible when floating around, as soon as they move the become visible.

~Mass: I understand that but if you continue to read the next sentence states a set number for the amount of mass he can manipulate.

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If he had to guess he'd say anywhere betweem 500 and 1000 yards.

~Didn't plan on turning anybody to metal.

~Took out the molecular part

~You're right Arrancar can't use bakudo, but they can use bakudo like techinques. I used bakudo as an example to give a visualization of how the technique would work.

~I'm a firm believer in a fair non-godmod fight, so i'm not one to just say oh I use a sonido to do whatever it is I do. Instead a create a tech that has usage and limits so it will be fair and limited.

~Added the weakness

~To your rape comment, you're not really raping me. You're doing your job to make sure my app is perfect and acceptable for the fairness of the site. I really did understand why you put that in there.

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:03 pm

Sorry for not catching those. Not going to make any excuse for myself missing those. And thank you for understanding. I was pretty sure I took the turning people into metal out. Must've missed it. Anyways:

There has been a rule added though and I'm sorry I didn't inform you earlier, the primera and cero espada are not allowed to have Segunda Etapa. Sorry for the inconvenience.

As for the swords thing, how is it they are invisible? I'm not sure how your ability keeps them from being seen.

Bakudo. Okay, I understand it now. The bakudo in () where offensive is just an example.

Magnetic Charm. Is it possible to really slow down someone else's magnetic pull? I'm not a science person so I don't know much of it but I've never heard about anything like that in manga or anime.

Thank you for adding those weaknesses in, by the way.

And taking out the molecular thing.

I did say that there are not going to be any wormholes and they are still in there.

I suppose that's it for the day. Have a good one. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:48 pm

~ No Segunda for me :"(

~ I really can't explain how it keeps them invisible cause i'm not a super science nerd like Steven King, but I can tell you why or the strategy behind them being invisible. Simply put I want people to underestimate Nishi, if he release and you see no weapon then people IC of course take it as he is defenseless and helpless. As long as the opponent can see them coming to react I don't really see the issue with them being invisible when no being used.

~ You're correct just an example of what type of technique it would be considered

~ I believe you have the wrong thought about Magnetic Charm. Nishi doesn't slow down his opponents magnetic pull he changes his own to be opposite of theirs. Example you know when you have a magnet in school and one side says S and the other says N. If you put 1 N and 1 S together they attract, but if you put 2 N's or S's together the repel one another. This is what Nishi's does exacept his adds his speed with it so he can appear next to his opponent.

~ Do you mean the wormhole in the description or the actually wormhole techniques that have a limit and usage to them


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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:10 pm

North attracts to south, and the same side repels.

as for the invisibility, is it like a chameleon, which blends in, or like air, perfect?

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:43 pm

I knew I was wrong on that after I read it again.

They blend in, if you look at the video below it's a visualization of what i'm trying to explain.

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:49 pm

okay, my last question, maybe kayla has more, but anyway do the swords move with you like they did him in teh video? and if so do they stay invisible while doing so?

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Thu Mar 31, 2011 12:07 am

The swords move with Nishi, but once the swords move the become visible.

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:56 pm

The wormholes. Just in general. I'm not allowing wormholes at all. Which I need to put into the rules.

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:48 pm

Removed the wormholes and added the trait Liquid Metal instead.

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:01 pm

approved for now, your rank and power level will be decided by the others.

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PostSubject: Re: Nishi Kozen   Fri Apr 01, 2011 5:34 pm

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