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PostSubject: Sakura Aya Cho (WiP)   Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:21 am

Basic Information

Name: Sakura Aya Cho

Actual Age: 9

Appeared Age: 20

Gender: Female

Looks: Sakura is a 5'6'' weighing 327 lbs Sakura's body is 100% metal.

Full Look:
 

Anime Look:
 

Personality: Robotic... has no true emotions.

Sexuality: Straight

Former Rank: Unknown

Former Division: Squad 12

Soul Society, Rogue, or Vizard Ranks: Vizard's tho prefer to be a loner.

Current Rank: N/A

Abilities Information

Name:Scanner
Type:Defense
Info: Her Left eye can scan the area up to a mile away for spiritual pressure.


Mask Information

Name: Ayane Chouko

Manifestation:
Hollow:
 

Unique Ability:
Missile Launch: Requires at least 100% charge before releasing at this attack Sakura can release up to 100 missiles at once but if she did so each missile will only have 1% of power making them rather useless. The Highest charge she can hold is 400%.

Power Level: 100% - A level 20 offensive Kido 400% - A level around 80 offensive Kido.
Per ever 100% takes 4 posts.

Cero Butterfly Staff: Once obtaining her Hollow mask a staff appears in her hands with each movement she makes a butterfly flies out of her staff. Sakura only needs a 50% charge to shot a Cero from her staff.

50% - Two post charge.

Electron Blaster: This move requires at least a 300% charge within her mask. This shots out a crimson cero from her mask around were her left eye is. This Cero has the power of 2 of her regular Cero's once using this move her mask retracts to the top of her head again.

300% - 12 post reguired before it can be activated.

Hollow Mask Appearance:
Mask:
 

Duration: Last 9 posts Recharge in 11 posts.

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Hitomi Hotaru (pupil of the eye, firefly)

Zanpakuto Looks:
Sword:
 

Zanpakuto Spirit:
 

Released Zanpakuto Description:
Push: Sakura creates a small barrier that surrounds around her and if the opponent gets to close to her to pushes them back 10 feet away from her.

Limit 4 per battles.

Neutron Blast: Sakura charges with a electrical impulse up to 200% and releases a beam from her head to the sky. The shot comes back from the sky and shots down from the sky. If Sakura sets her grid in the world of the living she takes control of the power grid and causing a black out. This would automatically set her charge at 150%. The most powerful charge she can obtain in this form is 350%.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Aim for the sky Hitomi.

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
Released Look:
 

Bankai Information
(For former captains and lieutenants only)

Description:
Suppression: Sakura using the help of Hitomi can set a grid lock of over a 5 mile square radius. Within the Grid a black dome barrier is cast upon it the opponent may leave if they please but once stepping out they cannot see in. Walking into it looks like night has fallen done and a moon appears above them full the landscape has shimmering yellow lights which a human might can a firefly.

Spark Beam: Sakura releases from her beam and side grids what appear to be fireflies. Which she can set forth on the opponent and that can detonate at any point. These fireflies when exploded have the power of a small scale Hado. She doesn't need to have a charge to use this ability as it starts the second she releases bankai and it doesn't stop until bankai is over the amount of fireflies she can produce up to 10,000.

Looks:
Bankai:
 

Duration: Last 6 posts recharges in 7 posts.

History and RP sample

History:
Year 1:
Sakura was born in the lab of Squad 12. Her creation was all in due for after the fight with Aizen and the fact of new being's called the Vizards. Sakura was in fact within a series of man made artificial Vizards. Tho most of them were failures and had to be terminated and disposed of. Tho Sakura as well of 2 others were still promising.

In this year she was in her test tube. Not capable of any motor functions. She lied in her test tube wires in her in all directions. In this state she was technically unable to move tho the scientist was in the works of downloading her motor functions.

Example of what she looked like.:
 

Year 2:
By year 2 Sakura had all natural motor functions and could now live outside of the container she was born in. She had been able to learn how to move her fingers then her hands. Slowly her arms then her head. Once learning this she slowly learned how to move the rest of her body... torso, waist, hips, legs and feet. All due to a hard drive that was installed into them.

She had received her sword and could already release her sword. Once being able to move her arms and head the scientist made a hand made Tanto for her. They decided to not make her a Katana so that it wouldn't mess up her mobility. They thought a Tanto would be more acceptable so that it didn't way her down and that the small compatibility would help her keep her speed.

Sakura had learned how to access her Shikai by a force connection made between her and her swords spirit. She was placed back into the test tube with wires attached all around her head and face. On the side of test tube her sword was as well attached with wires. The scientist had then created a the world and the sword spirit within it. Using force they made the spirit so her release to Sakura. The release of her sword created a new appearance and power. (Please look above to see appearance.)

Her mask was still being installed. The scientist where still in the makes of putting her mask on. They had installed her side mask this was to help keep her mask on her head and all she had to do was push a little button on the side and the mask lowered itself down.

Year 3:
By year 3 she had her mask installed. The mask was retractable and could move from the top her head to in front of her face. It was made retractable by installing a button on the side of her head where her ears would be were replaced with a flat metal sphere that attached her mask onto her face. This mask was hand made by the scientist. So the characteristics of the mask was nothing like any hollow mask before. The mask was to represent a butterfly. This mask was made with gold painted steel and crimson glass. The glass that was installed into the mask was see through and was capable of not allowing anyone to see through it from the opposite side similar to that of sunglasses.

Mask:
 

She was now able to preform Bankai after 8 months in the tube and a ton of programing. Like before when she learned to release her sword. She was forced into a emotional shift within her swords world this was hard for the scientist as they had yet to make a program that could create emotions into a non living being. They didn't know that there needed to be a emotional shift within Sakura until after 3 months of programming there was no improvement with Sakura. So they momentary created a emotion disk that they installed into her this disc only helped her learn small minor emotions like when to recognize when she should be made or angry when a statement is told to her. This was a major shift within her and was rather difficult.

Once exiting her world the scientist noticed her world was temporally disabled and unable to access. This was the doing of Sakura's swords spirit tho she was created in the lab herself she had emotions and feelings within her. And she cared for Sakura and wanted her to learn to have emotions and how to deal with them. She said she would temporally allow Sakura to us this Bankai until the day would come when Sakura would hold true emotions and her Bankai could truthfully show itself to her.

In attempts to learn how her programming was going the scientist let her go on minor missions to test her powers and to see how she would handle the situation. Sakura stayed composed in the mission unlike one of the other man made Vizards and that vizard was scraped and destroyed.

Year 4:
She had learned in the late 3rd year that squad 12 was planning on scrapping her as the believed if she became any stronger she might over throw them. As the being of Year 4 she escaped the lab and retreated to a rather land. She was followed by many Squad 2 shinigami's each were killed as they came in contact with her.

Year 5, 6, 7, & 8.
Sakura was a loner for most of the time. She searched around both the worlds of living and the soul society. Until her late years of year 8 was confronted by a Vizard asking her if she would like to join. She ended up joining.

Year 9:
Currently in process.

RP Sample: Look at Shiko App.


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PostSubject: Re: Sakura Aya Cho (WiP)   Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:12 pm

Info:
Sakura is a full body robot, made from a secret organization within Squad 12. They construction of Sakura was a hassle in itself. She wasn't just made from parts that one might find in a scrap yard she was made originally using a Shinigami. This shinigami was a very injured being who was gonna die soon. The women was never recorded down as being part of the experiment. They harvested her body so that they could assemble Sakura correctly. They need a Shinigami sacrifice so they could make a Vizard artificially. Using samples they had of hollows they hand made a mask similar to a hollow. As Sakura was still a hollow doll they transferred blood that they had left of the Shinigami into Sakura.

Once they put the odds into Sakura they placed her into a large tube. The tube was filled with embalming fluid. There Sakura was placed with wires attached to every part of her.

The creators wanted to make Sakura as human like as possible so while she was in the tube they programed hardware into her. They made look as if she breathed from her mouth making her chest rise with each intake of air. They designed this as her main central exhaust system.

Once being fully created Sakura one day over heard her creators discussing her termination. They stated she was a monster and that if people heard what they done they would be killed. Sakura registered everything they heard and knew what she had to do she refused to be destroyed.


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PostSubject: Re: Sakura Aya Cho (WiP)   Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:35 pm

Sexuality: Has none she is a Android.

to put simply... wut. Androids dont exist in the bleach world, normally I would not care, but an android would be classified as a super human, not shinigami, and DEFINITELY not vizard.

Current Rank: Elite

Yeah, no. Your rping is NOT good enough for that, no offense of course.

Missile Launch: Requires at least 100% charge before releasing at this attack Sakura can release up to 100 missiles at once but if she did so each missile will only have 1% of power making them rather useless. The Highest charge she can hold is 400%.

How powerful exactly is the 100%? compare it to a cannon attack if you must.

Cero Butterfly Staff: Once obtaining her Hollow mask a staff appears in her hands with each movement she makes a butterfly flies out of her staff each butterfly is a concentrated Cero. Not only do they appear but Sakura only needs a 50% charge to shot a Cero from her staff.

yeah, concentrated cero? do you have any idea the ammount of control that you would need for that? anyway, with each movement? so you move an inch and a butterfly explodes?

Electron Blaster: This move requires at least a 300% charge within her mask. This shots out a crimson cero from her mask around were her left eye is. This Cero has the power of 6 of her regular Cero's once using this move her mask retracts to the top of her head again.

6 of her regular ceros? I think not! Gran rey is about 3 times as powerful, and that requires a blood sacrifice.

Suppression: Sakura using the help of Hitomi can set a grid lock of over a 100 mile square radius with this ability it stops anything for going air born. It brings it straight down to the ground. Jumping within the grid is hard itself and it takes alot of energy to do so.

100 miles? HELL NO, not only overpowered but also complete bullshit. No one flys in Bleach, they use reiatsu platforms. And also the ability of gravity is not an avalible one, as it can be used far too overpoweredly.

Push: Sakura creates a small barrier that surrounds around her and if the opponent gets to close to her to pushes them back 10 feet away from her.

Put a limit and a cooldown, and its fine.

Neutron Blast: Sakura charges with a electrical impulse up to 200% and releases a beam from her head to the sky. The shot comes back from the sky and shots down from the sky. If Sakura sets her grid in the world of the living she takes control of the power grid and causing a black out. This would automatically set her charge at 150%. The most powerful charge she can obtain in this form is 350%.

Okay Ill say it again, what the hell is this 350% thing?! you will NOT get stat boosts for that, regardless of anything.

Superior Suppression: Sakura using the help of Hitomi can set a grid lock of over a 50 mile square radius with this ability it stops anything for going air born. It brings it straight down to the ground. Flash Steps are now useless. Within the Grid a black dome barrier is cast upon it the opponent may leave if they please but once stepping out they cannot see it. Walking into it looks like night has fallen done and a moon appears above them full the landscape has shimmering yellow lights which a human might can a firefly.

Again. NO! same reasons as before.

Life Lock: Sakura suppresses anyone in her grid that contains large amounts of spiritual pressure to have the motor functions of that of a human meaning they now have the speed of any other human.

Yeah, HELL NO. This is BEYOND overpowered and borders on are you fucking serious? The speed of an average human is 5 MPH, the speed of the average shinigami? 20-30 MPH Captains can go past the fastest train in the world, the bullet train, which can go up to 180 MPH, so yeah, hell no.

Spark Beam: Sakura releases from her beam and side grids what appear to be fireflies. Which she can set forth on the opponent and that can detonate at any point. These fireflies when exploded have the power of a Bala that arrancar have. She doesn't need to have a charge to use this ability as it starts the second she releases bankai and it doesn't stop until bankai is over the amount of fireflies she can produce are over a million.

Over a million? Are you serious? Byakuya only had over a million because he was cannon, and his didnt explode with the power of a bala.

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Speed: 300 + 200 Shikai + 200 Mask + 580 Bankai + 580 Res

Endurance: 80

Reiatsu: 70
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PostSubject: Re: Sakura Aya Cho (WiP)   Mon Apr 04, 2011 9:21 pm

Edited on ever point you put up and as for the charge thing it is not a power boost in stats it like a battery after each move she goes back down to 0% but she need to recharge before she can us it again. Example like plugging a game in. Its not like she is powering up her stats she is only charging energy so that she can attack again.

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PostSubject: Re: Sakura Aya Cho (WiP)   Mon Apr 04, 2011 10:00 pm

Added more information if you would like me to post more please do tell me what else you would like me to post. I don't mind posting more in fact I'm enjoying it. And I also edited her abilities yet again Kuro. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Sakura Aya Cho (WiP)   Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:52 am

I would like to point out that the Twelfth Division did NOT create any of the vizard. Aizen did. She may have been created by them but Aizen was the one who created the vizard. As the leader of the vizards and the former captain of twelve would be your creators, they wouldn't have anything to do with creating vizards.

Your not a former lieutenant or captain so, as you were created by them, explain to me how you have your bankai. How did you get it, who trained you, where did you train, how long did you train.

Your history is rather short. Though your character is only nine years old, I have seen longer histories for five year olds. No offense but still. Describe pretty much EVERYTHING. Your character is younger than most of them so you need to kick our asses and show us what ya got.

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Endurance: 70

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PostSubject: Re: Sakura Aya Cho (WiP)   Thu Apr 07, 2011 5:33 am

Could you please lock this thread I don't believe I will get this done in awhile so please lock it as I plan on making another character and one day I will make another account and Finish this app. Please and Thank you.

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PostSubject: Re: Sakura Aya Cho (WiP)   Thu Apr 07, 2011 1:41 pm

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